How clouds are made
Illustrator: Emily L Author: Emily L
Up high in the clouds was a little boy and his name was Jacob. Jacob was there with his grandpa. Grandpa opened a case that he was holding and in the case was a big silver object.
Grandpa put object in a hole that looked like a machine. Grandpa took a huge breath and blew out , a huge cloud came out and floated away.
Jacob took a breath and blew out , but when Jacob blew out all that was left was a small cloud.
Grandpa showed Jacob how to make a huge cloud. Jacob blew and blew but nothing came out , suddenly the pole broke off.
Grandpa helped Jacob get up , and the cloud maker was ruined. Jacob bent the machine into a funny shape , they both looked up into the sky.
Jacob bent the machine into a funny shape , they both up into the sky. Jacob bent the cloud machine into a star shape showed it to Grandpa. Grandpa took a breath and blew out.
It was beautiful , then Jacob bent the object into a bunny. A star and a bunny cloud floated in the sky , and a love heart cloud was heading towards the star and bunny cloud. Grandpa and Jacob sat there quietly and enjoyed the view.
Characters
Grandpa Jones
Jacob
Things used in this story
Cloud machine
Ladder
Wooden things
Hi Emily
ReplyDeleteGood job getting your post up on the blog. I had to change two things before I could let it be published - you had put your last name TWICE at the top.
Remember, no last names on the internet.
I'm looking forward to seeing what are things you're learning about!
Carol
hi emily i like how you aded the caretes
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