MY AVATAR
Hi this is my avatar.
I chose blue eyes because it is as blue as the ocean.
I chose blond hair because it is as yellow as the sun.
I chose a dark pink dress because I would wear that kind of outfit.
I chose red lips because it looks like my mum.
I chose a dot background because I like dots.
Dear Emily
ReplyDeleteYour Avatar is SOOO CUTE.
Next time try doing a diffrent sentince start
Hi Emily, I like it how you made a story saying how clouds were made. I really enjoyed how Jacob bent the cloud shaper into a bunny. I think your next steps are to use speech marks. Keep it up.Carys
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